Abigail's · Corner

“I can’t do it!”

Eight-year-old Lowri Elen Teresinha Clorus shoved the offensive harp away from her and glared at it. Master Martin looked at her rather reproachfully, like he just suffered the greatest insult, his mustache moving up and down as he surveyed his young pupil....

I should probably make some comments about this story myself. I wrote this for a writing contest that did not require any money for entry and will edit your stories. There have been some pretty bad ones in there, so I rather wrote this one (I had the outline done already) and edited it in two hours about four hours before the deadline, to see what the judges would think of my primlinary editing. However, I'm not embarassed about it (not like the outline) so I'll post it anyway. To see the rest of any story, click the last word in the entry (in this case, doctor).

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Edward Connard snuffled into his bedroom and glanced at the TV. On it showed two older men, one about sixty, the other fifty-five, although his wife told him he looked ten years younger than that, speaking at the National Convention of Science about their new discovery and receiving an award for it. Normally, he would watch it, since he was a doctor and had to keep up on all new medical discoveries, but tonight, he knew what would be said. He knew since he was the younger doctor....

I sit back and stare at the ceiling. The smell of my brother’s hot chocolate drifts over to me. I must admit that it smells good. But I am not here to drink hot chocolate. I’m not even here to fantasize about drinking hot chocolate while I drink something else. I am here to write....

Lowri, Larkin, and thier daughter Renita.

Cadwgawn and Marilyn. Cadwgwan is coming to tell Marilyn that her son died in birth.

Timofey and Robin at the Winter Ball

Addie and Zoran have just come back from a brief time away after thier marriage. Jakov is in the red and orange. IN a few minutes, at least one person will be dead and another seriously hurt.

Reynard came to tell Lowri that he is leaving to go fight up north.

Timofey and Robin: Read thier Story: http://aslannet.org//Abigail's_Corner/writings/TimofeyandRobin.html

Lowri is sick and coughing, Reynard is just there to comfort her, even though she would say she is fine.

Read their story: http://aslannet.org//Abigail's_Corner/writings/jakov%20Dijana%20dance.html

Story of them:
http://aslannet.org//Abigail's_Corner/writings/jakovKrisimera%20prates.html

(please copy the whole link because I can not figure out how to embed it in the test.)

Glyn and Emry talking. Glyn is reallly a girl in disguised. Emry is mentioning that they should go swimming.

Lowri and Reynard as they start to fall in love, before The Moment.

As promised, it is Thursday and I will post pictures.


Marilyn, just as Cadwgawn sees her.


Madoc and Caryn, with their son, Hainor, who my mom thinks looks likes a monster.


Lowri and Reynard at their wedding. Lowri is the daughter of a merchant. Reynard is a lord. Their marriage was arranged.


Marilyn sleeping on Cadwgawn. For you who do not know, Marilyn's husband was killed in an accident and she was pregnant. Cadwgawn's past, for all intensive purposes, is unknown, except that his betrothed is "gone".


Lowri and Reynard one night. Lowri is a very good harpist so she played for him.


Dijana, a princess from Rikblak and her capturer, Sari. Dali is Dijana's daughter.

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